Story Pages

This 4 pages is my Story pages..coming after main page and character introduction page.
From the top is the begining of the story and with the cursor pointing at the "next" button,and the second also the same. The third one is to choose the option between "open" and "don't open",which i show is clicking "open". The last page would be the result page after clicking "open" or "don't open" and u can go back to the previous page to choose again by clicking "back"

How do you feel about this?comments pls....TQ

This is the page after main page....which is character introduction,and the cursor is move to the navigator button "Next"..
any comments..?suggestion?

This is my Main pages....
The 1st one shows that my cursol move to the right up to turn off the music control,
and the second one is the cursor move to the character introduction navigator,so we can see when the cursor move to it,it is glowing and become bigger.
In the middle of two loading pages i did two kind of arrangement for the character,which the 1st one is Cupid and Psyche are each at the right and left,and the 2nd main page i put Cupid and Psyche near to each other.
Which style of character arrangement would u think is better?and how about other part of teh main page? Give suggestion to me so that i can improve! TQ

Main page~half done..
This is the main page of my Interactive design,which the interactive pages is actually telling the story of cupid..this is the main page of it (title hvnt done)..how you guys think about the colour n design?

My progress

This is my progress.....i added a hanger on it...how does it feel?
do til eye pain,n kip got tears....lately my right eye got problem again...aih...

My loading page...

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This series is my loading page progress design....hmm,i feel abit messy for 1st two loading pages..haha...
Any comments?suggestions? welcome to comments n critic my work,i need ur suggestion to improve! thx for support ya!

comments abt my...FRAME...

These frames are for my 2nd final project design...i created 4 different pattern of frame but duno which to choose...the design is base on classic cursive vs victoria style.any comments?which one u like most?please choose ONE....thx